Thursday, April 8, 2021

Maia's visit to the horse truck

 

Today I was learning we are learning how to add what we saw in writing.

I enjoyed looking in the horse truck and writing about it.

I found it challenging to stay on track and not talk.

My digital learning object shows about the horse truck.

Next time I would change some of my writing

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  2. Kia ora Maia,
    I saw the horse truck parked outside the school and wondered who owned it and why it was at a school. Now I know! Thank you for sharing your writing.
    I found it very hard to read your writing. Are you able to edit your slide and take the dark colouring away from your writing so we can read it?
    from Mrs Torrie

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