Friday, October 22, 2021

Some Where Wild

 

Today I was learning to write about my story

I enjoyed making it

I found it challenging to not get stressed

My digital learning object shows about the some where wild

Next time I would change everything

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1 comment:

  1. UnknownOctober 25, 2021 at 9:54 AM

    Kia ora Maia,
    My name is Matua Whitu and I am in Room 9 at St Mary’s School in Gisborne.

    Positive I really like the mood you have captured with your layout, it really sets the scene.
    Helpful You could possibly change the colour of the text to stand out more.
    Thoughtful I can picture you new ending in my head, way to go!



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